"In your country, are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father

In your country, are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to their families?" A: Today, we can see that women in our country have an effect on a lot of area diversely. Their participation about problem to society has become more increase But there are still several of difference about social role between father and mother in Korea. First of all, many people think that most of men in Korea have to succeed full time job employment after gratuating their college. They are also busy earing the money to get married. Because they have responsibilities to keep up their families in the future. In contrast to this, while men are working their office, women use to do house work such as cooking, cleaning living room and doing wash dishes. But most important thing they have to do is taking care of their children. Consequently, we should respect their part each other.

Hi there Sam! You held our class today. I wonder why. Are you feeling okay? Anyway, I appreciate your time making your homework. I think, now that we are all in the modern world, the reponsibilties of men can now be a responsibilty of women and vice versa. Women are now able to drift away from their motherhood in order to work for their family. On the other hand, I believe one major responsibility of men is to take care of his family by providing them their needs. Thank you for such a very good point. Have a great week ahead Sam! Kindly go over the corrections I made for your work. ~ Teacher Alice In your country, are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to their families?\" Today, we can see that women in our country have an effect on a lot of area diversely. >> Today, we can see that women in our country have an effect on a lot of areas diversely. >> OR Today, we can see that women in our country have an impact on various areas. Their participation about problem to society has become more increase >> Their participation on societal problems has increased. But there are still several of difference about social role between father and mother in Korea. >> But there are still several differences between the social roles of father and mother in Korea. First of all, many people think that most of men in Korea have to succeed full time job employment after gratuating their college. >> First of all, many people think that most of men in Korea have to succeed a full time job after graduating their college. >> OR First of all, many people think that most men in Korea have to get a full time job after graduating college. They are also busy earing the money to get married. Because they have responsibilities to keep up their families in the future. >> They are also busy earning money to get married because they have the responsibily to keep up their families in the future. *Never start a sentence with \"because\". It is a conjunction so connect it with a sentence. In contrast to this, while men are working their office, women use to do house work such as cooking, cleaning living room and doing wash dishes. >> In contrast to this, while men are working in their office, women use to do house work such as cooking, cleaning the living room and doing the dishes. But most important thing they have to do is taking care of their children. >> Correct! Consequently, we should respect their part each other. >> Consequently, we should respect each other\'s parts.