In your country are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to

2019-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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In my country, the responsibilities of a mother and a father are different yet. I think the situations are also similar in another countries. Traditionally, a mother does house chores and a father works in the society. A mum keeps their kids and makes foods for their children and her husband. A dad earns money to support their family. But now the tendency is changing increasingly. Our government makes a law for fathers who want to nurture their child and for mothers who want to further their career. And public perception of a role of parents are also different from the past. The people think that households should be shared and mother should have an occupation.

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In my country, the responsibilities of a mother and a father are different yet.

>>> In my country, the responsibility of a mother is different than that of a mother yet,


 I think the situations are also similar in another countries.

>>> correct


 Traditionally, a mother does house chores and a father works in the society.

>>> correct


 A mum keeps their kids and makes foods for their children and her husband.

>>> A mother takes care of their children and prepare food for them as well as for her husband.


 A dad earns money to support their family.

>>> While, a father works to earn money and support his family.


 But now the tendency is changing increasingly.

>>> correct


 Our government makes a law for fathers who want to nurture their child and for mothers who want to further their career.

>>> Our government made a law where fathers can now nurture their children and mother\'s who want to further their career can do so too.


 And public perception of a role of parents are also different from the past.

>>> Public perception of parent\'s role are also different from that of the past.


 The people think that households should be shared and mother should have an occupation.

>>> People think that households should be shared and mother\'s should have an occupation.

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