In your country are the responsibilities of a mother the same as the responsibilities of a father to
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In my country, the responsibilities of a mother and a father are different yet.
>>> In my country, the responsibility of a mother is different than that of a mother yet,
I think the situations are also similar in another countries.
>>> correct
Traditionally, a mother does house chores and a father works in the society.
>>> correct
A mum keeps their kids and makes foods for their children and her husband.
>>> A mother takes care of their children and prepare food for them as well as for her husband.
A dad earns money to support their family.
>>> While, a father works to earn money and support his family.
But now the tendency is changing increasingly.
>>> correct
Our government makes a law for fathers who want to nurture their child and for mothers who want to further their career.
>>> Our government made a law where fathers can now nurture their children and mother\'s who want to further their career can do so too.
And public perception of a role of parents are also different from the past.
>>> Public perception of parent\'s role are also different from that of the past.
The people think that households should be shared and mother should have an occupation.
>>> People think that households should be shared and mother\'s should have an occupation.
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