In your country, is punctuality considered to be a virtue, or do people regularly arrive late? How d

2020-12-12 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I think my country is very punctual country. I’ve learned the punctuality from when I was children at the school and home. But some people are not punctual. I don’t know why they do that. And the some people include my friend. But I didn’t talk to her about the late. Because I figured out that she never corrests punctual. 😊😊😊😊 So, now I really don’t care her late. Hahahaha

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Hey, [이름]. Thank you for considering the homework today. I appreciate it. =) Have a great weekend and let\'s talk again on Monday. ~Teacher Jane c\",)


I think my country is very punctual country.
>> I think people in my country are punctual.

I’ve learned the punctuality from when I was children at the school and home.
>> I have learned punctuality from when I was a child at school and at home.

But some people are not punctual.
>> CORRECT =)

I don’t know why they do that.
>> I do not know why they are not.

And the some people include my friend.
>> And my friend is one of those people.

But I didn’t talk to her about the late.
>> But I did not talk to her about being late.

Because I figured out that she never corrests punctual.
>> Because I figured out that she never considers punctuality important.

So, now I really don’t care her late.
>> So now I really do not care about her being late.

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