In your country, is there a syndicate behind beggars?

2020-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 James

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I didn\'t totally understand this subject. but, I try to write. I think my country has a good welfare. Compared to old days, almost beggars is not around. We have many policy that getting support fund in many kinds of fields.

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Hi [이름]!!!

It is nice of you to answer your homework. I know that you can learn from this activities that will help you know more about sentence construction.

Have a nice day ahead.

T. JAMES

I didn\'t totally understand this subject. but, I try to write.

>> CORRECT

>>>OR: I didn\'t totally understand this question, but I will try to answer it.
I think my country has a good welfare. Compared to old days, almost beggars is not around.

>>> I think my country has good welfare. Compared to the old days, almost beggars are not around.
We have many policy that getting support fund in many kinds of fields.

>>> We have many policies that getting support funds in many kinds of fields.

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