In your country, what do people think about a woman in her 30s who is unmarried?
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In Korea, it is not quite old even the woman is unmarried.
>>> In Korea, it is not said to be quite old if the woman is unmarried.
In my generations, the marriage rate keeps dropping.
>>> In my generation, marriage rate keeps dropping.
Around 35-year-old, a person can finally get married.
>>> When you reach the age of 35, you can and are allowed to get married.
The reason why people get married so late is a change of sense of value.
>>> correct
Traditionally, it is very common a man is married when they become an adult.
>>> Traditionally, it is very common for man to marry when they become adults.
But more and more people have been wanted their own life without making a family.
>>> But more people are wanting to live a life without making a family.
And the financial crisis of Korea encourages the tendency.
>>> correct
To keep a child until it grows up costs 260,000 US dollars in Korea.
>>> To raise a child costs 260,000 US dollars in Korea.
It is definitely a huge burden who starts their career.
>>> It is definitely a huge burden to start a career.
(Personally, I will get married but I can not afford to have babies even if I like kids very much.)
>>> correct
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