In your country, what do people think about a woman in her 30s who is unmarried?

2019-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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In Korea, it is not quite old even the woman is unmarried. In my generations, the marriage rate keeps dropping. Around 35-year-old, a person can finally get married. The reason why people get married so late is a change of sense of value. Traditionally, it is very common a man is married when they become an adult. But more and more people have been wanted their own life without making a family. And the financial crisis of Korea encourages the tendency. To keep a child until it grows up costs 260,000 US dollars in Korea. It is definitely a huge burden who starts their career. (Personally, I will get married but I can not afford to have babies even if I like kids very much.)

강사 첨삭

Hi Su ^^


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T. Lainey <\",)))><


In Korea, it is not quite old even the woman is unmarried.

>>> In Korea,  it is not said to be quite old if the woman is unmarried.


 In my generations, the marriage rate keeps dropping.

>>> In my generation, marriage rate keeps dropping.


 Around 35-year-old, a person can finally get married.

>>> When you reach the age of 35, you can and are allowed to get married.


 The reason why people get married so late is a change of sense of value.

>>> correct


 Traditionally, it is very common a man is married when they become an adult.

>>> Traditionally, it is very common for man to marry when they become adults.


 But more and more people have been wanted their own life without making a family.

>>> But more people are wanting to live a life without making a family.


 And the financial crisis of Korea encourages the tendency.

>>> correct


 To keep a child until it grows up costs 260,000 US dollars in Korea.

>>> To raise a child costs 260,000 US dollars in Korea.


 It is definitely a huge burden who starts their career.

>>> It is definitely a huge burden to start a career.


 (Personally, I will get married but I can not afford to have babies even if I like kids very much.)

>>> correct

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