In your country, what is the most strict policy that you know?
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There are a lot of strict policies with COVID-19 situation.
The most important policy among them is wearing a mask. People should wear a mask anytime anywhere, except their home. If they don’t wear it,they should pay a fine. On top of that, it’s not allowed to enter indoor stores to them. So there was a mask chaos at the beginning of the policy implementation. The policy kept maintaining during about 2years. But now
Government announced that we can take off the mask outdoors from next week. I think It’s a good news. For now, it’s time to back to the daily life before Covid-19.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
There are a lot of strict policies with COVID-19 situation.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are a lot of strict policies regarding the COVID-19 situation.
The most important policy among them is wearing a mask.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> Wearing a mask is the most important policy among them.
People should wear a mask anytime anywhere, except their home.
>> CORRECT!
If they don’t wear it,they should pay a fine.
>> CORRECT!
On top of that, it’s not allowed to enter indoor stores to them.
>> On top of that, it’s not allowed to enter physical stores without it.
So there was a mask chaos at the beginning of the policy implementation.
>> CORRECT!
The policy kept maintaining during about 2years.
>> The policy was maintained for about 2years.
But now Government announced that we can take off the mask outdoors from next week.
>> But now, our government announced that we can take off the mask outdoors from next week.
OR >> But now, our government announced that we can take off the mask outdoors starting next week.
I think It’s a good news.
>> CORRECT!
For now, it’s time to back to the daily life before Covid-19.
>> For now, it’s time to go back to our daily lives before Covid-19.
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