In your daily life, do you usually act fast or wait and plan more?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, it depends on which one I\'m thinking about something.
When it comes to something important or work, I usually make quick decisions and act.
However, when it comes to some tasks I have to spend a lot of money or personal things related to friends and family, I plan and act more.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Ji [이름]. Again, it was a pleasure having the class with you. You can write clear sentences and stay on topic. You’re using a wider range of vocabulary to express your ideas. Pay attention to punctuation marks and grammar. Check your sentences for small errors in articles and prepositions. Overall, you’re making steady progress. With a bit more attention to detail and practice, your writing will become even clearer and more natural. Keep it up. Have a great weekend! ~Teacher Jane c\",)
Well, it depends on which one I\'m thinking about something.
>> Well, it depends on what I\'m thinking.
When it comes to something important or work, I usually make quick decisions and act.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: When it comes to something important like work, I usually make quick decisions and act.
However, when it comes to some tasks I have to spend a lot of money or personal things related to friends and family, I plan and act more.
>> However, when it comes to some tasks, I have to spend a lot of money or personal time on things related to friends and family; I plan and act more.
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