In your opinion, are dress codes important?
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Dress codes are important. It is because that, Dress codes are manners. When we go to funeral, we should wear achromatic color clothes.
When we are invited dinner, we wear neat clothes or sometimes we need to wear the tuxedo. Can you image someone, who wear a beachwear came a funeral? I saw that kind of person in movies, not the real.
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Dress codes are important.
>> CORRECT!It is because that, Dress codes are manners.
>> It is because, Dress codes show manners.
When we go to funeral, we should wear achromatic color clothes.
>> CORRECT!
When we are invited dinner, we wear neat clothes or sometimes we need to wear the tuxedo.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> When we are invited dinner, we wear neat clothes or sometimes we need to wear suit and tie.
Can you image someone, who wear a beachwear came a funeral?
>> Can you imagine someone, who wears a beachwear come in a funeral?
I saw that kind of person in movies, not the real.
>> I saw that kind of person in movies, not in real life.
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