In your opinion, are family gatherings necessary to do?
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From where I stand, it depends on family because there are family members who talk well or not. Also, if their child is teenager, it could consider it. Let\'s remember when we were teens. At that time, I don\'t like my mum asks me something else . I used to not spend time with my family members. But, not anymore. I regret that I couldn\'t make a lot of memories with my family members. I did it only with my friends. By the way, it\'s kind of different on family. :)
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
From where I stand, it depends on family because there are family members who talk well or not.
>> From where I stand, it depends on family because there are family members who talk well, and some do not.
Also, if their child is teenager, it could consider it.
Also, if their child is teenager, it could consider it.
>> Also, if their child is a teenager, it could be considered.
Let\'s remember when we were teens.
>> CORRECT!At that time, I don\'t like my mum asks me something else.
>> At that time, I don\'t like my mum asking me something else.
I used to not spend time with my family members.
>> CORRECT!But, not anymore.
>> CORRECT!I regret that I couldn\'t make a lot of memories with my family members.
>> CORRECT!I did it only with my friends.
>> CORRECT!By the way, it\'s kind of different on family. :)
>> By the way, it\'s kind of different for each families. :)
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