In your opinion, Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why?
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Aging is more difficult for men. Usually, women more live than men. And Estrogens help against various diseases, while testosterone raises the risk of diseases.
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Aging is more difficult for men.
>> CORRECT
Usually, women more live than men.
>> Usually, women live longer than men.
And Estrogens help against various diseases, while testosterone raises the risk of diseases.
>> Also, Estrogen, a female hormone, helps protect against various diseases while Testosterone, a male hormone, increases the risk of diseases.
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