In your opinion, is it better to be a Boss or employee?

2020-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

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Dear [Name]. I think most people want to be a boss. But most people don\'t think to need a responsability as a boss. My decision is very important as a boss. It could be death or live in the serious situation. I don\'t know which is better. But when I was youth, I want to be a boss, now I don\'t want to be.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]! :)

Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)

- Tricia

I think most people want to be a boss.
>> I think most people want to be a boss.

But most people don\'t think to need a responsability as a boss.
>> But most people don\'t think about the responsibilities of being a boss.

My decision is very important as a boss.
>> Decision making is very important for a boss.

It could be death or live in the serious situation.
>> It could be a death and life situation.

I don\'t know which is better.
>> CORRECT!

But when I was youth, I want to be a boss, now I don\'t want to be.
>> But when I was young, I want to be a boss but now, not anymore.

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