In your opinion, it it easy to change bad habits?
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Obviously no. It\'s pretty hard to change the bad habits. You know, I used to try to quit smoke many times before. But, I failed that. And, it seems pretty hard to change my lifestyle. Especially, for me, it will take for 2 months in the morning shift. So, I don\'t like to wake up in early morning like you. In addition to that, when I made up my mind to change bad habits, it needs a lot of patients.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Obviously no.
>> CORRECT!It\'s pretty hard to change the bad habits.
>> CORRECT!You know, I used to try to quit smoke many times before.
>> You know, I used to try to quit smoking many times before.
But, I failed that.
>> CORRECT!And, it seems pretty hard to change my lifestyle.
>> CORRECT!Especially, for me, it will take for 2 months in the morning shift.
>> Especially, for me, it will take for about 2 months in the morning shift.
So, I don\'t like to wake up in early morning like you.
>> CORRECT!In addition to that, when I made up my mind to change bad habits, it needs a lot of patients.
>> In addition to that, when I made up my mind to change bad habits, it needs a lot of patience.
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