In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of studying at home?

2021-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think there is no any cons of studying at home to me but to the other people, there might be some conses of it. First, I can focus more to my study with no any interfernece of the other people. (Pros) And second, I can think about the study more because no one tell me the answers of the questions. (Pros) And then, in my friends opinion, there are a lot of cons of studying at home. First, I can\'t learn about something deeply because my parents are not a teacher about my study supject. (Cons) And second, I can do other things or think about something that is not about study during the study.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

When the coronavirus outbreak forced the government to close schools for the foreseeable future, it brought into sharp focus a new reality for millions of parents who now have to balance working from home with looking after their children’s education. Schools in contaminant zones remain closed until further orders. With the study from home routine, many students are relying on the online classes held via different mediums. This comes with advantages and disadvantages as well. Your answers are really good. :) 

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I think there is no any cons of studying at home to me but to the other people, there might be some conses of it.
>> I think there are no cons when it comes to studying at home for me but for others, I there are. 

First, I can focus more to my study with no any interfernece of the other people. (Pros)
>> One of the pros is that I can focus more on studying without the  interference of other people. 

And second, I can think about the study more because no one tell me the answers of the questions. (Pros)
>> Second is that I can think more about the questions because no one would tell me the answer right away. 

And then, in my friends opinion, there are a lot of cons of studying at home.
>> Regarding my friends, they usually say that studying at home has a lot of cons. 

First, I can\'t learn about something deeply because my parents are not a teacher about my study supject. (Cons)
>> First is that, if they don\'t understand a specific topic deeply, their parents wouldn\'t know how to answer because they are not teachers of that subeject. 

And second, I can do other things or think about something that is not about study during the study.
>> Second is that I can do other things and get easily distracted while studying. 

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