In your opinion, what are the pros and cons of studying at home?

2021-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I think it is good to study. Because I can feel comfortable during studying. But there are some bad things too. For example, I can be disturbed by my smartphone.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

When the coronavirus outbreak forced the government to close schools for the foreseeable future, it brought into sharp focus a new reality for millions of parents who now have to balance working from home with looking after their children’s education. Schools in contaminant zones remain closed until further orders. With the study from home routine, many students are relying on the online classes held via different mediums. This comes with advantages and disadvantages as well. Your answers are really good. :)

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I think it is good to study.

>> I think it is good to study at home because I feel more comfortable.

Because I can feel comfortable during studying.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

But there are some bad things too.

>> CORRECT

For example, I can be disturbed by my smartphone.

>> CORRECT

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