In your opinion, what are the reasons why there is a continuous increase in the number of Coronaviru
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I think many businesses and schools reopen their gate. Peoples do not follow the basic quarantine rules, because it has lasted so long that people are tired.
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I think many businesses and schools reopen their gate.
>> I think many businesses and schools reopen their gates.
Peoples do not follow the basic quarantine rules, because it has lasted so long that people are tired.
>> People do not follow the basic quarantine rules, because it has lasted so long that many people are already tired of it.
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