In your opinion, what could be the reasons why it is so difficult for people to give up and quit smo
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Well, it\'s hard to answer it. But I\'m pretty sure that it\'s hard to live where you have to survive in a kind of environment. like studying, making a living, making money. Also we can get a stress from those.
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Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
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Well, it\'s hard to answer it.
>> CORRECT!
But I\'m pretty sure that it\'s hard to live where you have to survive in a kind of environment.
>> CORRECT!
like studying, making a living, making money.
>> Like for example when you are studying, making a living or money.
Also we can get a stress from those.
>> CORRECT!
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