In your opinion, what do you think is the most terrible disease?
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I think all of diseases is terrible, but the most terrible disease is Alzheimer\'s disease, dementia.
I’ve just seen the person who get an Alzheimer disease in the drama. And I thought it’s very terrible disease to not only himself but also other close people, especially their family. If my parents get the disease, and they cannot memory me, It’s really to be hopeless.
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Hi Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I think all of diseases is terrible, but the most terrible disease is Alzheimer\'s disease, dementia.
>> I think all diseases are terrible, but the most terrible disease is Alzheimer\'s disease or Dementia.
I’ve just seen the person who get an Alzheimer disease in the drama.
>> CORRECT!
And I thought it’s very terrible disease to not only himself but also other close people, especially their family.
>> And, I thought it’s a very terrible disease not only to himself, but also for other people close to them, especially their family.
If my parents get the disease, and they cannot memory me, It’s really to be hopeless.
>> If my parents get the disease, and they cannot remember me, it\'s really hopeless.
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