In your opinion, what factors contribute to a good movie?
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In your opinion, what factors contribute to a good movie?
Fisrt of all, A good synopsis. It means making a detailed story.
and famous mian actor, directer.
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Fisrt of all, A good synopsis.
>>First of all, a good synopsis.
It means making a detailed story.
>>correct
and famous mian actor, directer.
and famous mian actor, directer.
>>It is directed by a famous director and the main actor should also be famous.
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