In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years?
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Q: In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
A:It must be \'airplane\'. Before airplane, we couldn\'t go to other countries easily because it takes a lot of time by ship. But now, we can go to the other side of the world in one day. Isn\'t it amazing?
This transportation changed everything. It made world as an internationalized society. Let me overstate. It changed the history.
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Q: In your opinion, what has been the most significant transportation innovation of the past 200 years? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience.
A:It must be \'airplane\'.
A:It must be \'airplane\'.
>>> It must be the \'airplane\'.
Before airplane, we couldn\'t go to other countries easily because it takes a lot of time by ship.
>>> Before airplanes, we couldn\'t easily go to other countries because traveling by ship takes a lot of time.
But now, we can go to the other side of the world in one day.
>>> Correct.
OR
>>> Nowadays, though, we can easily fly to the other side of the world in a day.
Isn\'t it amazing?
>>> Correct.
This transportation changed everything.
This transportation changed everything.
>>> Correct.
OR
>>> This means of transportation changed everything.
It made world as an internationalized society.
>>> It made the world a mix society.
Let me overstate. It changed the history.
>>> In other words, it changed history.
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