In your opinion, what is the best age to be? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
The Best Age (poem type)
By Chistine Heather [이름]
What would happen
What would happen if I\'m 13
I\'ll be allowed to wear makeup then
And lip gloss
And eye glitter
Nah, I\'m kidding.
But my face MIGHT change
A bit more prettier
And a bit more slimmer
I\'ll be the most oldest and respectful and responsible when I\'m 13.
I wanna be 13 right now...
강사 첨삭
Hello Heather! Thank you for the poem you made about your age. We will talk more in class. I\'ll see you then! ~ T. Lyn
What would happen
>>What would happen?
What would happen if I\'m 13
What would happen if I\'m 13
>>What would happen if I\'m 13?
I\'ll be allowed to wear makeup then
>>The I can do my makeup.
And lip gloss
And lip gloss
>>I can put on my lip gloss.
And eye glitter
And eye glitter
>>Also, I wear my eye glitter.
Nah, I\'m kidding.
Nah, I\'m kidding.
>>Correct. No, I\'m just joking.
But my face MIGHT change
But my face MIGHT change
>>But my face may change.
A bit more prettier
A bit more prettier
>>I will be a little prettier.
And a bit more slimmer
And a bit more slimmer
>>And a bit slimmer.
I\'ll be the most oldest and respectful and responsible when I\'m 13.
I\'ll be the most oldest and respectful and responsible when I\'m 13.
>>When I\'m 13, I will be older, more respectable, and more responsible person.
I wanna be 13 right now...
I wanna be 13 right now...
>>I want to be 13 years old right now.
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