In your opinion, what is the best celebration/ holiday you have in your country? Why do you think it
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Hi there Sir [이름]!
Happy Monday!
Thanks for sharing about the best celebration/ holiday in your country.
I hope to experience it someday.^^
I am sure you are already excited for the upcoming holiday.
Have a great day.
See you soon.
Teacher Nina
There are two big holidays in Korea what is called Seolnal which is New Year’s Day in accordance with Lunar calendar and Chuseok that is Korean Thanks Giving day.
>> There are two big holidays in Korea what is called Seollal which is New Year’s Day in accordance with Lunar calendar and Chuseok that is Korean Thanks Giving day.
On Seolnal, family members get together and reunite.
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People typically visit their home towns where their parents are living or have lived regardless of how far they are.
>> People typically visit their hometowns where their parents are living or have lived regardless of how far they are.
They are willing to travel for many hours, longer than 10 hours in some extreme cases.
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Most parents are waiting for and desperate to see their children and grand-children.
>> Most parents are waiting for and desperate to see their children and grandchildren.
On Seolnal’s morning, all of the family members visit their ancestors’ graves and bow in front of the graves after putting some food on the alters.
>> On Seollal morning, all of the family members visit their ancestors\' graves and bow in front of the graves after putting some food on the altar.
In addition, children bow to their parents to show their respect and appreciate for what they have been given.
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In return, parents give their children money called Saebaedon and a few words of blessing.
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>> OR: In return, parents give their children money called,\"Saebaedon\" and a few words of blessing.
Family members catch up and play games together.
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When I was younger, we used to visit our relatives who lived in the same town.
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