In your opinion, what is the difference between a productive weekend and a relaxing weekend?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, when we get things done that we should do, we can say that we spent a productive weekend.
For example, preparing for materials for work that we couldn’t do it on our worktime is a productive thing we should do.
Also, doing home responsibilities, such as cleaning our room or doing the laundry, can be productive things we should finish.
On the other hand, we can spend a relaxing weekend while doing what we wanted to do but couldn’t do because of busy weekday.
For example, going to good places with our loved ones can make our weekend relax.
If we are exhausted with meeting people (in the case of salesperson), we can spend a relaxing weekend while reading a book and watching a movie alone.
We should find the balance of them, between a productive thing a relaxing thing, and spend a perfect weekend that we can be satisfied.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Great job! I like how you explained both productive and relaxing weekends and gave clear examples. Your ideas are thoughtful, and you showed that you understand the importance of balance. Keep writing like this! It’s very clear and easy to follow!
~Teacher Polly
In my opinion, when we get things done that we should do, we can say that we spent a productive weekend.
For example, preparing for materials for work that we couldn’t do it on our worktime is a productive thing we should do.
Also, doing home responsibilities, such as cleaning our room or doing the laundry, can be productive things we should finish.
>>In my opinion, when we complete the things we should do, we can say we had a productive weekend.
For example, preparing for materials for work that we couldn’t do it on our worktime is a productive thing we should do.
>>For example, preparing materials for work that we couldn’t finish during work hours is a productive activity.
Also, doing home responsibilities, such as cleaning our room or doing the laundry, can be productive things we should finish.
>>Doing household responsibilities, such as cleaning our room or doing the laundry, is also productive.
On the other hand, we can spend a relaxing weekend while doing what we wanted to do but couldn’t do because of busy weekday.
>>On the other hand, we can have a relaxing weekend by doing things we want to do but couldn’t during the busy weekdays.
For example, going to good places with our loved ones can make our weekend relax.
>>For example, going to nice places with loved ones can make our weekend relaxing.
If we are exhausted with meeting people (in the case of salesperson), we can spend a relaxing weekend while reading a book and watching a movie alone.
>>If we feel exhausted from meeting people (as in the case of a salesperson), we can relax by reading a book or watching a movie alone.
We should find the balance of them, between a productive thing a relaxing thing, and spend a perfect weekend that we can be satisfied.
>>The key is to find a balance between productive activities and relaxing activities so we can enjoy a weekend that leaves us satisfied.
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