In your opinion, what is the healthiest Korean dish?
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There are many healthy Korean dish. I understand the healthiest Korean dish among all Korean food is the Jib Bab. It means a home meal that made in home. It is made by mother in particular, and it is composed of rice food and side dish. The food which buy at restaurant is sometimes so delicious, but it is not healthful to our body. The owner of shop often uses a harmful product to make a sweet taste. But mother do not use it for their family. It is the why Jib Bab is the healthiest Korean dish.
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There are many healthy Korean dish.
>> There are many healthy Korean dishes.
OR >> There are various healthy Korean dishes.
I understand the healthiest Korean dish among all Korean food is the Jib Bab.
>> I understand the healthiest Korean dish among all Korean food is Jib Bab.
It means a home meal that made in home.
>> This is a home-made meal.
It is made by mother in particular, and it is composed of rice food and side dish.
>> Mothers usually cook it, and it it made of rice and side dishes.
The food which buy at restaurant is sometimes so delicious, but it is not healthful to our body.
>> The food we buy in the restaurant is sometimes delicious, but not healthy for our body.
The owner of shop often uses a harmful product to make a sweet taste.
>> Shop owners often use harmful products to make the food sweet, but moms don\'t use it, for the sake of her family\'s health.
But mother do not use it for their family.
>> Shop owners often use harmful products to make the food sweet, but moms don\'t use it, for the sake of her family\'s health.
It is the why Jib Bab is the healthiest Korean dish.
>> CORRECT!
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