In your opinion, what is the most effective way to prevent the spread of the virus? Why?
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The most effective way to prevent virus is to avoid cause of diseases.
>>CORRECT!
Of course, it is hard to know every cause of diseases because new diseases are always appeared although we solved existing diseases thanks to development of medical science.
>> Of course, it is hard to know every cause of diseases because new diseases always appeared although we solved existing diseases thanks to development of medical science.
However, avoiding cause which we already know is method to reduce damage at least.
>>CORRECT!
For example, MERS, SARS, and Ebola virus gave big fear all over the world.
>>CORRECT!
Because of these virus, many people are died and every countries tried to effort to prevent infection.
>>Because of these virus, many people are dead and every countries tried their efforts to prevent infection.
Eventually, we became safe.
>>CORRECT!
However, Novel Corona virus caused ‘Wuhan pneumonia’ is occurred recently in China.
>>CORRECT!
The world including Korea is emergency.
>> The world, including Korea , is in emergency.
We already know that bat is a host of MERS, SARS, and Ebola virus.
>>CORRECT!
New corona virus is also.
>>CORRECT!
Despite bat is cause of many infectious viruses, Chineses eat that and now we are suffering damage.
>>Despite bat is cause of many infectious viruses, Chinese people eat it and now we are suffering the damage.
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