In your opinion, what makes communication successful during a call?
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Exact expressions makes communication successful.
During phone call, it is hard to know detailed atmosphere.
Because, we only talk through the voice.
So, exact expression is important.
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Exact expressions makes communication successful.
>> Exact expressions make communication more successful.
During phone call, it is hard to know detailed atmosphere.
Because, we only talk through the voice.
>> During a phone call, it is hard to understand the detailed atmosphere because we only communicate through voice.
So, exact expression is important.
>> Therefore, using exact expressions is very important.
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