In your opinion, when should a child start getting pocket money from the parents? Why?
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You are definitely right, Sir [이름]!
We should give our kids money if they know how important and the value of it.
And they should also be knowledgeable that money couldn\'t be found on the street.
We are working hard to earn for them. I guess it is really important for parents to let their kids handle money.
In that way, they will be able to know the pros and cons of being like a \"one day millionaire\" person.
There are some kids who don\'t mind whether they are spending too much in a day.
Kids should also have like a timeline. The pocket money they have will be good for how many days.
Once they spend all of it in one day, they will be the ones who will suffer in the end.
Thanks for a great composition once again.
I hope that you are having a great time.
Teacher Nina
I think it will be appropriate for a child to start receiving pocket money when he/she turns 10 years old.
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It is the time when a kid can begin to realize the value of money and can be aware of the importance of it.
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They will get to know they need money to buy something they want such as ice-cream, chocolates, or candies.
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Giving them pocket money and letting them manage their own budget will help them grow with a sense of financial matters.
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In the modern society, financial management even in our personal life cannot be too emphasized.
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We all work for a living regardless of our professions, although our jobs also play other roles such as contributing to our society, earning fame, and building reputation, etc.
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In that sense, managing finance is inevitable and we should have quite good financial knowledge.
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We need to equip ourselves with such a financial sense and form a habit to be good finance persons from childhood.
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When we give our children pocket money, we should stick to the principle.
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