In your opinion, which season is the most beautiful? Which season is the most comfortable for you?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think spring is most beautiful of seasons.
I mentioned earlier, I like spring\'s lovely mood.
When spring is coming, many flowers is bloom and climate become warmer.
And Korea\'s winter is so cold, so spring is more beautiful.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing the most beautiful season in your country.
Enjoy the beautiful day!
~Kelly^^
I think spring is most beautiful of seasons.
>> I think spring is the most beautiful season.
I mentioned earlier, I like spring\'s lovely mood.
>> Correct
When spring is coming, many flowers is bloom and climate become warmer.
>> In spring, many flowers bloom and the climate become warmer.
And Korea\'s winter is so cold, so spring is more beautiful.
>> In Korea, the winter is so cold, so spring is more beautiful.
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