In your opinion, why do rocks have different sizes and shapes?
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Rocks are actually made of giant boulders broken up into peices. They are broken by wind, water, and other rocks too. Rocks aren\'t broken because of artificial ways, it just broke up by nature itself. Rocks come in different sizes because they are very hard. Even a scary, fierce wind ca\'t break up all rocks in the same size. All things can\'t sculpt rocks into a fish, too. There are some machines that sculpt rocks. but those sculpt-rocks are artificial and dosen\'t count. Every rocks are truly different in sizes and shapes. Even two identical rocks have a tiny difference in a special spot of theirs.
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Good day, Heather! I always admire you for being so imaginative. Keep using your imagination and exploring things. Have a wonderful day to you.~T. Lyn
Rocks are actually made of giant boulders broken up into peices.
>>Rocks are originally giant boulders that are broken into small pieces.
They are broken by wind, water, and other rocks too.
>>It is mainly caused by wind, water, and other rocks.
Rocks aren\'t broken because of artificial ways, it just broke up by nature itself.
>>Rocks don\'t break because of artificial ways, they just happen naturally.
Rocks come in different sizes because they are very hard.
>>Rocks come in different sizes because they are solid and very hard.
Even a scary, fierce wind ca\'t break up all rocks in the same size.
>>I think even scary, fierce wind can\'t break all rocks of the same sizes.
All things can\'t sculpt rocks into a fish, too.
>>I think no one and nothing can sculpt rocks into fish, too.
There are some machines that sculpt rocks.
>>There might be some machines that can do such.
but those sculpt-rocks are artificial and dosen\'t count.
>>However, those rocks are artificial which doesn\'t count.
Every rocks are truly different in sizes and shapes.
>>Truly that rocks have different sizes and shapes.
Even two identical rocks have a tiny difference in a special spot of theirs.
>>Even the two identical rocks are slightly different in special points.
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