In your opinion, why do you think some people want to change their legal gender?
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I personally think the environment they\'ve been through is important. They couldn\'t accept it, it depends on the environment. For example, your parents took care about you as male although you were bone as female. You could be confused between male and female. So, the parents roll is the most important that they bring up a child. And, when they feel it\'s not fair between male and female, it could be possible. Especially, the men need to considerate female first in Korea.
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
I personally think the environment they\'ve been through is important.
>> CORRECT!They couldn\'t accept it, it depends on the environment.
>> CORRECT!For example, your parents took care about you as male although you were bone as female.
>> For example, your parents took care of you as male although you were born as a female.
OR >> For example, your parents took care raised you like a male although you were born as a female.
You could be confused between male and female.
>> CORRECT!So, the parents roll is the most important that they bring up a child.
>> So, the parents role is the most important thing when they bring up a child.
OR >> So, the parents\' way of upbringing their kids is the most important thing.
And, when they feel it\'s not fair between male and female, it could be possible.
>> CORRECT!Especially, the men need to considerate female first in Korea.
>> Especially, the men need to be considerate with women first in Korea.
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