In your opinion, why do you think the number of infected people with coronavirus has started going d
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Viruses need hosts to live, so it is important to block the contacting with infected people. Because of this reasons, China block their city and many countries prohibit Chineses enter their countries.
In Korea, the number of infected people is decreased at last week although it is over 100 persons yet. I think it have some reasons.
First, the ability to confirm infected people is very good. We can check about 17,000 persons in one day. Also, we can reduce the use time through drive through. So, we checked a lot of people who have a possibility to be infected in short time relatively and prevented new infection as separating them with other people.
Also, citizens tried to effort not to contact other people and always wore a mask as much as we felt lack of mask.
Finally, the number of confirming is less on weekend than on weekday.
The phenomenon of decreasing infected people is positive and it is early to feel easy. Thus, we should be careful continuously.
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Viruses need hosts to live, so it is important to block the contacting with infected people.
>>Viruses need hosts to live so, it is important to block contacting with infected people.
Because of this reasons, China block their city and many countries prohibit Chineses enter their countries.
>> Because of this reasons, China block their city and many countries prohibit Chinese people to enter their countries.
In Korea, the number of infected people is decreased at last week although it is over 100 persons yet.
>> Because of this reasons, China block their city and many countries prohibit Chinese people to enter their countries.
In Korea, the number of infected people is decreased at last week although it is over 100 persons yet.
>>In Korea, the number of infected people is decreased last week although it is over 100 persons yet.
I think it have some reasons.
>>I think it has some reasons.
First, the ability to confirm infected people is very good.
>>I think it has some reasons.
First, the ability to confirm infected people is very good.
>>CORRECT!
We can check about 17,000 persons in one day.
>>CORRECT!
Also, we can reduce the use time through drive through.
>> Also, we can reduce the time used through drive through.
So, we checked a lot of people who have a possibility to be infected in short time relatively and prevented new infection as separating them with other people.
>>CORRECT!
Also, citizens tried to effort not to contact other people and always wore a mask as much as we felt lack of mask.
>>Also, citizens tried their effort not to do contact with other people and always wore a mask as much as we felt lack of mask.
Finally, the number of confirming is less on weekend than on weekday.
>>CORRECT!
The phenomenon of decreasing infected people is positive and it is early to feel easy.
>>CORRECT!
Also, citizens tried to effort not to contact other people and always wore a mask as much as we felt lack of mask.
>>Also, citizens tried their effort not to do contact with other people and always wore a mask as much as we felt lack of mask.
Finally, the number of confirming is less on weekend than on weekday.
>>CORRECT!
The phenomenon of decreasing infected people is positive and it is early to feel easy.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, we should be careful continuously.
>>CORRECT!
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