In your opinion, why does the season change?
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The sun dosn\'t move. The EARTH moves. Also, when the earth move around the sun, it actually does not turn in a perfectly round circle. It moves in a slightly long oval. So when the earth is the farthest away from the sun, it becomes Winter. When the earth is the closest to the sun, it is Summer. And when the daytime and nightime is the same, it is the Spring or Autumn equinox. So that is why there is seasons. Somewhere that is different than Korea has 1, 2, or 3 seasons that\'s because they are farther or closer to the equator than Korea. Fun Fact! : The earth itself orbits, too.
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Good day, Christine! Thank you for your explanation. Looking forward to discussing it with you in class. I\'ll see you then. Take care always! ~ T. Lyn
The sun dosn\'t move.
>>The sun doesn\'t move.
The EARTH moves.
>>Correct. The earth rotates.
Also, when the earth move around the sun, it actually does not turn in a perfectly round circle.
>>Also, when the Earth revolves around the sun, it doesn\'t actually rotate in a perfect circle.
It moves in a slightly long oval.
>>It moves in a slightly elongated oval.
So when the earth is the farthest away from the sun, it becomes Winter.
>>So, when the Earth is furthest from the sun, it is winter.
When the earth is the closest to the sun, it is Summer.
>>Summer is when the Earth is closes to the sun.
And when the daytime and nightime is the same, it is the Spring or Autumn equinox.
>>And when day and night are equal, it is the spring and autumn equinox.
So that is why there is seasons.
>>So, that is why there are four seasons.
Somewhere that is different than Korea has 1, 2, or 3 seasons that\'s because they are farther or closer to the equator than Korea.
>>In Korea and other places, there are 1, 2, or 3 seasons because the equator is farther or closer to them.
Fun Fact! : The earth itself orbits, too.
>>Fun Fact is that the Earth also orbits itself.
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