In your own opinion, is it right/okay to brag about your accomplishments? Why?
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I think it\'s not okay.
It\'s rude to brag about something. And people will hate you if you kept on being rude to everybody.
You have to appreciate other people and appreciate you in your mind.
You can be appreciated if you appreciate and respect other people\'s accomplishments.
-The End :-)-
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In your own opinion, is it right/okay to brag about your accomplishments? Why?
I think it\'s not okay.
>>> CORRECT
It\'s rude to brag about something. And people will hate you if you kept on being rude to everybody.
>>> It\'s rude to brag about something and people will hate you if you kept on being rude to them.
You have to appreciate other people and appreciate you in your mind.
>>> You have to appreciate other people so that they\'ll appreciate you in return.
You can be appreciated if you appreciate and respect other people\'s accomplishments.
>>> CORRECT
>>> CORRECT
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