In your own opinion, what is the best way for a person to leave a good impression?
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It depends on where you are or who you meet. No matter who you meet, there are some things in common to strike a good impression as the following.
1. You need to wear a well-ironed shirt or polished shoes. If you show up to a business meeting in a shirt with lots of crumples and wrinkles or scuffed shoes. you can\'t convey a good impression to business partners.
2. Too much makeup suited to a night out sets off alarm bells with those with you.
3. You need to show confidence and competence by keeping a good posture. you should stand up straight or head up, shoulders back and relaxed. Slumped shoulders and head bent won\'t come in handy at all.
4. You are careful not to put on cologne too much because some people feel migraine, allergic to or nausea. Imposing your fragrance on others is inconsiderate when you meet someone for the first time.
5. You are to show that you\'re attentive to others by keeping eye contact when others say to you. Lack of eye contact will get you wrong.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Steve!
2. Too much makeup suited to a night out sets off alarm bells with those with you.
3. You need to show confidence and competence by keeping a good posture. you should stand up straight or head up, shoulders back and relaxed. Slumped shoulders and head bent won\'t come in handy at all.
4. You are careful not to put on cologne too much because some people feel migraine, allergic to or nausea. Imposing your fragrance on others is inconsiderate when you meet someone for the first time.
5. You are to show that you\'re attentive to others by keeping eye contact when others say to you. Lack of eye contact will get you wrong.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. You need to wear a well-ironed shirt or polished shoes. If you show up to a business meeting in a shirt with lots of crumples and wrinkles or scuffed shoes. you can\'t convey a good impression to business partners.
>>You need to wear a well-ironed shirt and polished shoes. If you show up to a business meeting in a shirt with lots of crumples and wrinkles or scuffed shoes, you can\'t convey a good impression to your business partners.
2. Too much makeup suited to a night out sets off alarm bells with those with you.
>>CORRECT!
3. You need to show confidence and competence by keeping a good posture. you should stand up straight or head up, shoulders back and relaxed. Slumped shoulders and head bent won\'t come in handy at all.
>>You need to show confidence and competence by keeping a good posture. you should stand straight keep your head up, with your shoulders back and relaxed. Slumped shoulders and bent head won\'t come in handy at all.
4. You are careful not to put on cologne too much because some people feel migraine, allergic to or nausea. Imposing your fragrance on others is inconsiderate when you meet someone for the first time.
>>You should be careful not to put on too much cologne because some people may experience migraine, allergic reaction or nausea. Imposing your fragrance on others is inconsiderate when you meet someone for the first time.
5. You are to show that you\'re attentive to others by keeping eye contact when others say to you. Lack of eye contact will get you wrong.
>>You are to show that you\'re attentive to others by keeping eye contact with them when they are speaking. Lack of eye contact will give them the wrong idea about you.
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