In your viewpoint, what are the advantages and disadvantages of commuting?
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In my viewpoint, the advantages of commuting are watching books and watching youtube. And In long commuting cases can study for self-improvement. The disadvantages of commuting are tired and hard. Also, don\'t take your own time.
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In my viewpoint, the advantages of commuting are watching books and watching youtube.
>> From my point of view, reading a book or watching YouTube are the advantages of commuting.
And In long commuting cases can study for self-improvement.
>> Also, for long commutes, I can study.
The disadvantages of commuting are tired and hard.
>> The disadvantages of commuting is that it\'s tiring and hard.
Also, don\'t take your own time.
>> Also, public transport usually has a fixed schedule so I need to adjust based on that.
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