Incentives of military services

I disagree with this statement. I know most countries have no that kind of mandatory services. And I can understand the men lose their time for about two years. This is why they don't want to go to military. But is is same with women. Women have a period. It bothers us. And when it start, we have to be careful. Plus, this period at least does almost 40 years. Also , we bear babies. It is painful. This is why nowadays young ladies don't want to bear theirbabies, too. So in my opinion, if the government want to give the men inventives, they have to give the women incentives of what they have a period and bearing. Ps. Teacher, I am not good at grammerㅜㅜ So I think today's composition has lots of errors ㅜㅜ

Fantastic Tuesday!

First, I want to thank you for sharing your thoughts about the topic. I was actually laughing when I was reading your composition. ^_^

Well, it\'s true that its kinda unfair if men will be given incentives for going to the military. 

It would be better if they will go to the military as their service to their country without any incentive, right? ^_^

Anyway, you did a good job on your composition just check on the corrections. Have a wonderful Tuesday! 

 I disagree with this statement.
>>CORRECT!

>>or I disagree with the statement.

I know most countries have no that kind of mandatory services.
>>I know most countries don\'t have that kind of mandatory services.
And I can understand the men lose their time for about two years.
>>And I can understand if men thinks the two years in the military is a waste of time.
This is why they don\'t want to go to military.
>>This is why they don\'t want to go to the military.
But is is same with women.
>> But it is the same with women.
Women have a period. It bothers us.
>>Women have periods. It bothers us.

>>or Women have periods that makes us uncomfortable.

And when it start, we have to be careful.
>>And when it starts, we have to be careful.
Plus, this period at least does almost 40 years.
>>Plus, we have this period for almost 40 years.
Also , we bear babies. It is painful.
>>We also bear and give birth to babies which is very painful.
This is why nowadays young ladies don\'t want to bear their babies, too.
>>This is why nowadays, young ladies don\'t want to get pregnant or to bear a baby.
So in my opinion, if the government want to give the men inventives, they have to give the women incentives of what they have a period and bearing.
>>So in my opinion, if the government wants to give men incentives, they also have to give incentives to women for bearing and giving birth.