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2010-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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The day before he had to depart to America he showed me a bag on website of duty free shop. He wanted to give me something a choice. But I don't want the Etro bag so I said to him. "If you can't suitable bag for me it's okay you can give me nothing." And yesterday at the gate of boarding bridge he called me. "Sorry Jju~~~ I can't choose a bag in duty free shop. If you don't mind I'll buy a watch. Is it okay?" He might be agonized. So I thought a man of a woman is always difficult. He went to America for his work with an assignment for me. When I went on a trip to Japan I just bought a perfume for him. I make an excuse for buying small thing when I went to Japan I had a no job. Anyway have a good weekend lei~~!! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hi J!!! I think your boyfriend really loves you so much that he always to buy you something that you like whenever he has a trip abroad. And of course it's just normal for us not to like everything that they bought because our tastes are different. But as they ay it's the thought that counts. Have a great week ahead of you and see you on wedenesday. Lei J   The day before he had to depart to America he showed me a bag on website from a duty free shop.>>correctHe wanted to give me something a choice.>>he wanted to give something to choose from.But I don't want the Etro bag so I said to him.>>But I don't want the Etro bag and I told him."If you can't suitable bag for me it's okay you can give me nothing.">>If you can't find a suitable bag for me, it's okay if you will not buy me anything.And yesterday at the gate of the boarding bridge he called me.>>correct"Sorry Jju~~~ I can't choose a bag at the duty free shop. >>correct Is it okay?">>correctHe might be agonized.>>correctSo I thought that a man of a woman is always difficult.>>correctHe went to America for his work with an assignment from me.>>correctWhen I went on a trip to Japan I just bought a perfume for him.>>correctI made an excuse for buying small thing when I went to Japan I had no job. >>correctAnyway have a good weekend lei~~!! ^^ >>correct

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