Increasing staff productivity.
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Increasing staff productivity is one of the biggest issues in contemporary corporates, since work-life balance has been emerged as an important factor in one\'s quality of life. Unlike the past, employees prefer to enjoy more time without any kind of interferences from their companies, even if it lowers salaries they will get at the end of the month or harms their reputation among people holding managerial positions. In this regard, enabling workers to become more productive is an urgent challenge that needs to be addressed. Ironically, giving more autonomy to employees would help resolve this matter. It doesn\'t mean that companies shoud just allow more freedom to their staff, but by introducing policies that foster strict meritocratic system, firms could enjoy enhanced effectiveness in their overall performances. Once workers believe that they will be rewarded, regardless of their current positions, solely by abilities, it offers a great motivation for them to raise productivity.
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Increasing staff productivity is one of the biggest issues in contemporary corporates, since work-life balance has been emerged as an important factor in one\'s quality of life.
>>CORRECT
Unlike the past, employees prefer to enjoy more time without any kind of interferences from their companies, even if it lowers salaries they will get at the end of the month or harms their reputation among people holding managerial positions.
>>CORRECT (just note the use of \"kind of\" always follow a singular form of the noun, so it should be: any kind of interference ^ ^)
In this regard, enabling workers to become more productive is an urgent challenge that needs to be addressed.
>>CORRECT
Ironically, giving more autonomy to employees would help resolve this matter.
>>CORRECT
It doesn\'t mean that companies shoud just allow more freedom to their staff, but by introducing policies that foster strict meritocratic system, firms could enjoy enhanced effectiveness in their overall performances.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"should\" or maybe typo error ^ ^)
Once workers believe that they will be rewarded, regardless of their current positions, solely by abilities, it offers a great motivation for them to raise productivity.
>>CORRECT
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