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Hello, Miss. [Name]!

I also believe that a wide range of solutions is available to help cope with traffic and pollution problem.

Improving fuel price and public transportations are true.

Anyway, good luck in your test tomorrow!

~Teacher Chloe

Traffic congestion and air pollution have become inevitable problem in modern society.

>>Traffic congestion and air pollution have become inevitable problems in the modern society.

Regarding this, although some assert that increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve these problems, I believe that some other measures can be taken into consideration.
>>Some assert that increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve these problems. While it is true, I also believe that some other measures should be taken into consideration.
To begin with, rising the price of petrol would be one of the solution to reduce air pollution and traffic congestion.

>>Firstly, increasing the price of petrol would be one of the solutions to reduce air pollution and traffic congestion.

By increasing the petrol price, people might less willing to purchase private cars or less use their own cars to save money.

>>This way, people might less willing to purchase private cars or less use their own cars.

However, in spite of increased patrol price, a large number of people will still continue using their own cars as their private cars are the most convienient vehicles to commute.

>>However, despite increasing the price of petrol, I suppose a large number of people will still continue to use their own cars because they are more convenient than public transportations.

Therefore, government should educate people about devastating impacts of global warming to discourage them to use their own vehicles.  

>>Therefore, the government should educate people about the devastating effects of global warming to discourage them use their own vehicles.