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On top of that, government should invest in the development of public transportation systems and encourage people to use public transportation system to overcome traffic and pollution problem.

>>On top of that, the government should invest in the development of public transportation systems and encourage people to use public transportation system to overcome traffic and pollution problem.

A good system of public vehicles accomplished by better infrastructure maybe delighted to everyone and can attract individuals to use public transportation such as well-managed train and bus schedules and creating various bus route will have successfully bring up in lessening traffic and pollution problem.
>>A good system of public vehicles accomplished by better infrastructure maybe a delight to everyone and can attract individuals to use public transportations such as well-managed trains and buses and creating various bus routes will be successfully brought up to lessening traffic and pollution problem.
In conclusion, increasing the price of petrol could be the one way to resolve growing traffic and pollution problem.

>>In conclusion, increasing the price of petrol could be one of the ways to resolve growing traffic and pollution problem.

However, I believe that more effective way to control this issue will be the development of public transportation system and educating people about destructive outcomes of global warming.  

>>However, I believe that there are more effective ways to control these issues will be the development of public transportation systems and to educate people about destructive effects of global warming.