Infinite challenge
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [이름],
Thanks for your composition. I appreciate it ^_^..
~Teacher Megan~
HERE ARE MY CORRECTIONS:
One of my favorite TV program is the \"Infinite challenge\", which already have been broadcasting for 10 years.
>>> One of my favorite TV program is the \"Infinite challenge\", which had been airing for 10 years.
the concept of this show is to challenge anything.
>>> the concept of this show is to challenge anything.
sometimes they were really hard to try, such as a pro-wrestling, bobsleigh.
>>> Correct.
their self to challenge for impossible was touching. but their true selves are making people laugh.
>>> their challenge was impossible for touching. but their true selves are making people laugh.
they have many talents for making jokes, such as comedy show, talk show.
>>> Correct.
The main mc of this show is Mr. [Name] who has the most popular among from the twenties to the sixtieths in Korea.
>>> The main mc of the show is Mr. [Name] who is the most popular among from the twenties to sixtieths in Korea.
Even when he was a late 20\'s, he just was a reporter, not famous.
>>> Even when he was in his late 20\'s, he was a reporter, not famous one.
But He always do best every at the moment, he is sitting on his feet.
>>> But He always do his best every moment, he is sitting on his feet.
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