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Unfortunately, your qustion is true.
Acadamy teachers are closer the University Entrance Test than school teachers.
The aim of their teaching is only that student let to get high score in the test.
The important thing to them is not process of study but only the result and the score.
I don\'t think that is not education.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
I\'m sorry to hear that especially that you are a head of a school. I think the system there is quite different from us. Don;t you think it\'s high time to change this system and to change the mindset of the people? the question is \"how\".
See you in class.
Aki~
Unfortunately, your question is true.
>>> CORRECT!
Acadamy teachers are closer the University Entrance Test than school teachers.
>>> Academy teachers are closer to the University Entrance Test than school teachers.
The aim of their teaching is only that student let to get high score in the test.
>>> The aim of their teaching is only that students let to get high scores on the test.
The important thing to them is not process of study but only the result and the score.
>>> The important thing to them is not the process of studying but only the result and the score.
I don\'t think that is not education.
>>> I don\'t think that is education.
>>> I think that is not education.
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