Influence children
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I think children are likely to be affected by some ads. If their favorite stars endorse some products, they tend to follow and buy the products blindly. Little children have a strong desire to own the high end toys , dolls , and some model cars if they watch the kinds of ads. That\'s why I think some ads that are aimed at young children should be restricted.
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Hi, Gi [이름]!
Thank you for completing your homework! I agree: If children see their favorite celebrity or toys they like in ads, they may develop a desire for them, leading their parents to buy these items even if they are not essential. I believe this is why it\'s important for parents to teach their kids about needs and wants.
- T. Caitlyn
I think children are likely to be affected by some ads.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I think children are likely to be influenced by some ads.
If their favorite stars endorse some products, they tend to follow and buy the products blindly.
>> CORRECT
Little children have a strong desire to own the high end toys , dolls , and some model cars if they watch the kinds of ads.
>> Young children often develop a strong desire to own high-end toys, dolls, and model cars when they watch certain types of ads.
That\'s why I think some ads that are aimed at young children should be restricted.
>> CORRECT
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