Influence of diet
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In what way can diet influence our appearance and personality? If I change a diet, I can be thin. Also, I can increase weight. But, I think personality is not related to a diet.
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If I change a diet, I can be thin.
>> If I change my diet, I can become thin.
Also, I can increase weight.
>> However, I can also gain weight.
But, I think personality is not related to a diet.
>> I think personality is not related to diet.
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