Influence of policians and scientists
학생이 쓴 원문
I think politicians more influence than scientist to the world.
Scientist invent great inventions.
But How the inventions will be use
is up to policians.
Sometimes A inventions is disaster like a nuclear bomb.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
I like your thought on this issue and I totally agree that these days. the world is hold by politicians. I hope Scientist will be able to invent something that will make these politicians genuinely kind and serving people. ^^
See you later!
Aki~
I think politicians more influence than scientist to the world.
>>> I think politicians have more influence than scientists in the world.
Scientists invent great inventions.
>>> CORRECT!
But How the inventions will be use is up to policians.
>>> But how the inventions will be used is up to politicians.
Sometimes A inventions is disaster like a nuclear bomb.
>>>Sometimes an invention is a disaster like a nuclear bomb.
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