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Also I will have a good relate with my boss because he know about my sense of loyalty for corporation and skill to work.
I had trable only one any country which are U.S.A, CANADA, JAPAN, and July this year I will travel to china. I’m not afraid woking or internship freign country. I’m already prepared for your admition.
1. 인사 - 가볍게, 안부, 시간, 날씨 등에 관해서 밝은 목소리로 대한다.
( greeting with interviewer like simple greeting, time, weather, )
Q) about greeting and time, wealther.
A)Greeting : I am a good for interview
Time : ex) 11:34 AM (Speak : eleven o’clock thirty four minute AM)
Weather : a little cold in morning and evening but warming in afternoon
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Also I will have a good relate with my boss because he know about my sense of loyalty for corporation
>>> Also I have a good relationship with my boss because he knows that I will be very loyal to the company.and skill to work.
>>> and that I have all the qualifications for this kind of job.I had trable only one any country which are U.S.A, CANADA, JAPAN,
>>> Once I have been to Canada, U.S.A and Japan.
and July this year I will travel to china.
>>> and this July I would be traveling to China.
I’m not afraid woking or internship freign country.
>>> I am not afraid to work or have an internship in other foreign countries.
I’m already prepared for your admition.
>>> I am prepared to be admitted.1. 인사 - 가볍게, 안부, 시간, 날씨 등에 관해?amp;shy; 밝은 목소리로 대한다. ( greeting with interviewer like simple greeting, time, weather, )Q) about greeting and time, wealther.
>>> Q ): questions would be about the time and the weather.A)Greeting : I am a good for interview
>>>A)Greeting : I am ready for my interview.Time : ex) 11:34 AM (Speak : eleven o’clock thirty four minute AM)
>>>Time: 11:34 am= It is eleven thirty four in the morning. Weather : a little cold in morning and evening but warming in afternoon
>>>Weather: The weather is unpredictable because it is a little cold in the morning and evening and warm in the afternoon.
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