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2. 인터뷰어는 우선 인터뷰 대상자 확인을 한다. : (interviewer confirm whether applier or not)
생년월일 (Birthday), 성(김씨 이씨 등등)Last name, 이름 (First Name) , 대학(School)
I’m [이름] [이름] [이름] and 27 years old. Also Soongsil- University student.
I was born Feb. 19 1985
( say : I was born February nineteen one thousand nine hundred eighty five)
Explain purpose of why you participant in this program or
(Explain purpose of program you want to participant)
I want to immigration in U.S.A. so that achieve my big dream before go to heaven. ^^More big plan was from first steps on begins. I want to step by step to go to there.
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Don't forget your prepositions and articles when making sentences. And practice reading dates.
2. 인터뷰어는 우선 인터뷰 대상자 확인을 한다. : (interviewer confirm whether applier or not)생년월일 (Birthday), 성(김씨 이씨 등등)Last name, 이름 (First Name) , 대학(School)I’m [이름] and 27 years old.
>>Correct
>>Hello, my name is [이름], I am 27 years old.
Also Soongsil- University student.
>>I am a student at the Soongsil University. Major in Economics.
I was born Feb. 19 1985
>>I was born on Feb. 19, 1985.( say : I was born February nineteen one thousand nine hundred eighty five)
>>(said/pronounced as: I was born on February nineteen nineteen eighty five.)Explain purpose of why you participant in this program or
>>Explain the reason why you want to participate in this program.
(Explain purpose of program you want to participant)
>>Explain the purpose of this program which you want to participate.I want to immigration in U.S.A. so that achieve my big dream before go to heaven. ^^
>>I want to immigrate to USA so that I can achieve my dream before I go to heaven.
>>I want to be an immigrant in the USA so that I can fulfill my dream before I go to heaven.
More big plan was from first steps on begins.
>>Big plans are made of little steps made from the beginning.
I want to step by step to go to there.
>>I want to achieve my goals step by step.
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