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2011-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

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peoples saw me and somebody sobbing loudly. seems to be my wife and children who are not child saw me as fully have worried person. another people talk about me. "who are so rich man and also have a lot of honor in Korea". but even though I heard that people's good talking about me on the bed, my face not good and seems to be not happy certainly. I saw me without any word thinking of why. he said weakly "if I knew that at that time, what I know about it now". I can understand that's meaning. I cannot control my tear. Just ordinary morning, just repeated in day on study of US CPA but I was tired to study about US CPA. and thought 'isn't it correct my way?'

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Hello!! Thanks for dropping by. Here are some of the corrections you need to review to enhance your english proficiency. Take care always� peoples saw me and somebody sobbing loudly. seems to be my wife and children who are not child saw me as fully have worried person. >> People were staring at me and I heard a woman crying. Then I figured the woman crying was my wife and the other people were my children with their family. They all wore a worried face. another people talk about me. "who are so rich man and also have a lot of honor in Korea". >> Then, one man spoke to me, maybe my son, and said, “You are such a rich man, and you are an honor to our country/Korea.” but even though I heard that people's good talking about me on the bed, my face not good and seems to be not happy certainly >>But even though I heard this I was not feeling good about myself and I was not happy. . I saw me without any word thinking of why >> I was just quiet and just thinking why. he said weakly "if I knew that at that time, what I know about it now" >> But suddenly I said weakly, “If I could just turn back time and did what I had to do I would have achieved a lot now.” ". I can understand that's meaning >>I understand what I meant. I cannot control my tear. Just ordinary morning, just repeated in day on study of US CPA but I was tired to study about US CPA. and thought 'isn't it correct my way?' >>?] I couldn’t help but cry when I woke up that morning. And on that day was my study for US CPA but I was tired to study about it. I thought, “isn’t it right my way?”.  

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