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2011-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Faye

학생이 쓴 원문

but I realized by dream what I have to do and how can I get to do and it's correct what I really want to do in the future.I believe I could get a different experience and new circumstance through Internship program. What I do is much more important for me than what I will be making at the company. I certain this internship program is good experience for me, . (Explain about your responsibility) My life being on responsibility. I had served as the president of my class a lot since elementary school. Also I have been progress in club of Internet community and my university.Club is stock investment and drawing picture, discussion with economic topic and presentation. also martial art.responsibility bring me so many energy.

강사 첨삭

but I realized by dream what I have to do and how can I get to do and it's correct what I really want to do in the future. >>>But my dream made me realize what I have to do for my future.  I believe I could get a different experience and new circumstance through Internship program. >>>I believe that I could gain different experiences in circumstances like in my internship.  What I do is much more important for me than what I will be making at the company. >>> Correct  I certain this internship program is good experience for me,>>> I am certain that this internship program is a good experience for me.   (Explain about your responsibility)My life being on responsibility. >>> My life on responsibility: I had served as the president of my class a lot since elementary school. >>> I served as the President of my class since I was in Elementary school. Also I have been progress in club of Internet community and my university. >>> Also I made progress with my Clubs in the Internet Community and in my University. Club is stock investment and drawing picture, discussion with economic topic and presentation. also martial art.responsibility bring me so many energy. >>> The club is about stock investment and drawing pictures, discussion with economic topic and presentation, and also Martial arts. Having responsibilities give me energy.  

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