Inner beauty
학생이 쓴 원문
We must offer my seat at the old and the weak person and that is good mind.
Someone have a light mouth.
We must not tease at disabillities.
We should not say anything terrible , poor, and weird.
We need to be considerate of others.
That is inner beauty!
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this [이름]. Well done! - Teacher Ivy
We must offer my seat at the old and the weak person and that is good mind.
>> We must offer our seat to an old and weak person and that is good act.
Someone have a light mouth.
>> Correct
We must not tease at disabillities.
>> We must not tease disabilities.
We should not say anything terrible , poor, and weird.
>> Correct
We need to be considerate of others.
>> Correct
That is inner beauty!
>> Correct
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