Inside 2
학생이 쓴 원문
I try to have concern new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts.
Inside out 2 is related to people\'s emotions and sympathy.
There are many students who are unable to control their emotions.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름]!
Indeed, I guess we also need to upgrade our skills if we want to understand the new generation. It might be challenging but if this is the way we can work hand-in-hand, then a change must be capeted and managed.
Aki~
I try to have concern new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts.
>>> I try to be concerned with new culture trends, even if I am not good at digital parts.
Inside Out 2 is related to people\'s emotions and sympathy.
>>> CORRECT!
There are many students who are unable to control their emotions.
>>> CORRECT!
OR>>> Many students are unable to control their emotions.
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